He slammed my head in the door.
He kissed me deep.
He made promises.
He threatened me.
Black eye.
New shoes.
Busted lip.
Brand new ride.
He hit me.
He begged me.
He said everything.
He meant nothing.
He loves me.
He loves me. Not.....
PS: this is not me. I just got inspired by an event.
Radom fact:
~Beethoven was extremely particular about his coffee, he always counted 60 beans per cup.
Have a wonderful weekend. Remember :You're never fully dressed without a smile.
Ebony.
Hmm so after we dress .. we should "draw" a smile on our faces to be fully dressed abi?
ReplyDeletelol@nice anon.
ReplyDeletethe write up was nice though.
Nice! People stay in bad relationships for all d wrong reasons
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very well written, the lines just jump out at you. DV will remain a no no for me.
ReplyDeleteLOL at Beethoven and his coffee.
lol @ nice anon
ReplyDeleteluv d write up sha.....very much
I always knew Beethoven had a comma, i dint kw twas dis insane
Great poem. That was me 2 years ago.
ReplyDelete@ Nice Anon: Yup you got it right! lol
ReplyDelete@Ms Dufa: I tell you, but they say no one will understand till you are in the shoes so i can't say much. lol
@Myne: I appreciate...:D Im getting good, yaaayyyyy
@Rene: Dnt mind beethoveen oh! mad man. lol with mad skill
Kymmy: I am really sorry to hear that, glad it's gone.
Really simple and to the point. I like. Lol at Beethoven. Seems most people have some sort of OCD in their veins haha
ReplyDeletemiss fab: This is a serious OCD case oh! ahn ahn! thanx though! hope you are alright!
ReplyDeleteHe loves you not!!!
ReplyDeleteI wonder why people still stay in such relationships.
This is more of an infatuation than it is love. It sad tho. Very Thought provoking. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteTGWTRH: You got it oh! it aint love!
ReplyDeleteSugarking: It's sad but this is plain reality, people need to wake up. Your welcome though.
your piece made me listen to Mario vazquez's Gallery. it's so true
ReplyDeleteaww that's my jamm!!!!
ReplyDeleteLMAO @nice...
ReplyDeletenice poem, realistic and fictional
at the same time...
and about the laugh thingy...
ReplyDeletei apologised, now...LOL
still love you!
Thanx but no thanx oh!!! I still have not forgiven you.lol me i dont love u sha!
ReplyDeleteLove the poem dear!!! How have u been?
ReplyDeleteThanx undercover. I am really great, just school, school and more school! :) Thanx for checking on me..i appreciate!
ReplyDeleteFirst time here. Feeling the blog. Cool prose, Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThat bros Beethoven composed his 9th symphony while deaf!! The guy na my man. Check out his 7th in A major, 2nd movement.
Thanx for stoping by....wooowww, talk about talent! I need to upgrade and do wonders! lol
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